WORLD TRADE CENTER MEMORIAL COMPETITION  REMEMBER - HONOR - RESPECT - RECOGNIZE - REAWAKEN:

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Introduction Jury Discussion Submission Changes My Submission My WTC Design Submission Guidelines Detailed Drawings
NEWS FLASH: The winning design for the WTC site by Daniel Libeskind has been replaced by one of the losing designs. Click here to see a comparison to MY design for the World Trade Center  Development

TO NEVER FORGET...  TO ALWAYS REMEMBER

On November 19th 2003, the 8 Semi Finalists for the World Trade Center  Memorial Competition were announced.  I congratulate each and everyone of them as well as the more then 5000 others who submitted designs to the competition.  To view the Semi-Finalist Designs please visit the Lower Manhattan Development Corporation official web site.

The following material is a preliminary presentation of my own submission  to the competition and an initial discussion of the Jury Selection.   I would also like to invite all others who made submissions to the competition to join me in THE 5201 ASSOCIATION were and your design will be present on line.  Please click here for further information on the 5201 Association and instructions on sending your submitted design for display. 


Everyone who made a submission can appreciate the enormous time, and effort that went into creating a design and preparing a presentation.  While each of us may have hoped to win none of us had any expectation of winning.  Rather our efforts were a means of expressing in a very personal way our sorrow for the victims and their families and coming to terms with our own feelings about the horrific events of September 11, 2001.   I consider my submission as my personal condolences to each of the victims and their families.

In addition to dedicating my effort to all those individuals lost during the Tragedy of September 11th 2001 and the men and women of our armed forces that have lost their lives since then in the War on Terror, I especially dedicate it to Maj. William R. "Salty" Watkins III and Capt. Eric "Boot" Das, of the United States Air Force who lost their lives in defense of our nation and in the pursuit of justice. 

 I  also pay tribute to Wayne Brewer and the thousands of people involved in the design and construction of the World Trade Center.  Without their creativity , ingenuity, innovation and dedication more then 30 years ago, thousands of more lives would certainly have been lost on that tragic  day. 

Finally, I would like to comment on  the continuing controversies regarding the manner of listing  the victims and the rescue workers.      I know and understand that this is a very emotional issue.  Many would like no distinction between the two, while most of the families  of the Emergency Response Personnel want to see them listed in some distinguishing manner.   Generally the guidelines of the Design competition required no distinction be made.   Even so, one of the Submissions touched the issue by having the names of  the EMP grouped  together  as a ribbon of names running though their display of all names

While all might be said to be victims of this tragedy, clearly there is a difference between  a victim of a horrible event and those who die in the line of duty responding to that event.  It seems to me that when we find ourselves in a deadly situation, perhaps its fire, or a crime, or a medical emergency, and someone comes to our aid at great risk to themselves the first thing we want to do is thank them.    Some might say they are only doing their job, no different from anyone else, then I think I would want to be thankful that there are men and woman with the courage to do that job and each day to brave unknown dangers to come to our aid without regard for their own safety, or the loss they would have on their own family.

One of the most moving images  for me was watching the Fire, Police, and Medical  personal rushing into those burning Towers as thousands of the buildings occupants were rushing out.   There is a difference between those who put themselves knowingly at risk - even in the line of - and those who find themselves by the most unfortunate circumstances in an emergency. 

 If we do not honor that difference and those men and women who lost their lives in the line of duty then we diminish and shame ourselves.

In my design I attempted to address this issue in several way.  First, on the Markers stones at the center of each Tower Footprint, each name off all victims and  EMP is listed together with no distinction.  Secondly, a sculpture showing Victims "Leaving" while the EMP go "in" is an historically accurate representation of the events (one of the principle guiltiness of the competition  is for historical accuracy).  And thirdly, along the wall of the South Ramp I have dedicated that area as a memorial with a bronze plaque of  each of the individuals who died in the line of duty.  I also include all those who in our Armed Forces have died in the war on terror and those who may yet loss their lives in the pursuit of Justice for the Tragedy of September 11, 2001.

To all Victims of the tragedy, please accept my profound condolences.

 

I invite any questions or comments.

Sherman Rattner
November 20, 2003
sirblue@ix.netcom.com

 

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P.S. Given the tragic events of September 11, 2001 and the great loss of life and suffering we might have hoped that the heroic spirit of thousands of people in the aftermath might have prevailed as a lasting legacy to come out of the tragedy.  Alas, nearly every aspect of the redevelopment efforts for the World Trade Center Site in since September 11, 2001 has been  filled with controversy and indeed there is much that we should feel outraged and deeply troubled by many of  the political, financial, design, and legal  aspects of what has and is occurring. 

I will be making extensive comments on that in the future and hope others will join in. 

I will also be making a more thorough assessment of each of the Finalist Designs in regard to what I believe are important considerations. 

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My design for the WTC site

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Discussion of the Competition and Jury Selection:

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While I am generally satisfied with my overall concept even in hindsight, and not withstanding that I was not one of the selected finalist, I believe I took a fundamentally different approach to creating a memorial then all of the the selected designs.  While each of the selected designs took the approach of making a single abstract grand signature statement of form, and I certainly considered that approach and to some extent incorporated a number of such abstract forms, I felt that a more effective and accurate approach to memorialize the Tragedy and to meet the dictates of the competition required the integration of a number of different elements.  Some of these considerations include my belief that it was important that the site would not only be a mausoleum to the victims, but also a place which is surrounded by people living and working today and in the future.  It must not only respect the past, but live in the present and inspire toward the future.  I believed that an appropriate memorial could not be so completely abstract that in generations to come people will have no idea what the forms stood for or what events took place.

(The "Tunnels" through the Tower Footprint Markers were inspired by the image of Mrs. Beverly Eckert holding the picture over her heart of her husband  lost in September 11th, 2001.  There was an emptiness left in her heart, and all those who lost loved ones, and our whole nation  that can never be filled, yet they have the strength to go on and more then that, to persevere and triumph)

Even as I did incorporate a number of large signature elements, it was critical to me to show some clear and unmistakable connection to the events of 911 and to incorporate in some manner the simple elegance and structural purity of the Twin Towers, which by their innovation saved tens of thousands of lives by remaining standing for almost an hour after the impacts (No other buildings in the world are likely to have remained standing at all).  Accordingly my design incorporated the following elements:  The Stylized 1/10th Scale Twin Towers; a large Portion of the Standing Wall; The Tower Footprint Markers serving to protect the sacred ground from activity around it while also the  passage ways through the Tower Markers are clear reminders; Markers to the Pentagon; Shanksville and the 1993 bombing of the WTC; a history of the Place and Events set in a bronze mural along the ramp to give a clear sense of what took place; An Earth Sphere suspended from the Surrounding Buildings that link the events of the Past through the present and to the future while reminding us of the global nature of the event and indeed the world; a separate wall to mark those who died in the line of duty not only on that tragic day but those yet to come in the continuing war on terror;  the "Last Steel" in honor of all those who toiled in the aftermath of the 911; and of course Bronze Statues of Victims leaving through one of the "tunnels" while the Rescue workers are going in for historical accuracy - I believe that to serve as a true memorial there must be some sense of it being more then just a beautiful abstract form which beyond its location seems to have no particular meaning to the events of September 11th, 2001.

Finally, my design was dictated by the requirements and guidelines of the Competition which were presented in a most empathic manner, such as the Slurry Wall, The Ramps, The Water Fall and the Buildings overhanging the site.  In this regard I am most perplexed by the decision of the judges which by every appearance, each of the selected designs seems to have omitted or violated to one significant extent or another key aspects of the guidelines.  The fact that without exception each of the designs relied on a single abstract concept, did not incorporate a single artifact or any representation of any kind or form of the Towers, seems surprising and limiting.  Many of the plans seemed to be variations of the Monument De Jour as in the Oklahoma City and Pentagon Monuments. (Even  the Vietnam Memorial ultimately incorporated Statutes of Soldiers) Others seemed  copies of designs that had already been discarded  in the design competition  for the redevelopment.

While I commend each of the finalists designs for their visual creativity and effort, in the words of Debra Brown Steinberg, a lawyer with Cadwalader, Wickersham & Taft who has donated her time to represent many victims' families:

"“These plans are impersonal and generic... There is nothing about them that is unique to the tragedy that happened down there.”  

I want to make absolutely clear that my comments do not come from not having been chosen as a finalist.  As one of the 5000 individuals who devoted an extraordinary amount of time, effort and careful thought to this undertaking, I believe I have as much understanding of the complex design and emotional issues and challenges, and am as informed and as entitled to have my perspective on the chosen designs as anyone.  By sharing my thoughts in this way and through my design it is my hope that it will contribute to others in making the best possible choice on a final memorial. 

As with most of those who made submission, I never undertook this effort with the expectation of "winning".  This is part of our own way of dealing with the tragedy of September 11, 2001.  I am proud of the work I have done and the work of all those who made submissions, especially the 8 finalists. 

Certainly there are many aspects of my submission from both a design and presentation standpoint that I would change, or want to improve upon, but overall I feel satisfied with the effort I made and with my concepts for approaching the many complex issues involved, as well as the individual design elements and themes.  While I had no expectation of winning, I had every expect ion that the Jury would at least select designs that conformed to the same competition guidelines and addressed all of the issues in a profoundly successful and moving way, visually, emotionally, and practically.    This is surely a situation where the "doing" and "how you played the game" is its own prize. 

I know I was not to my own satisfaction satisfied or successful in creating the perfect visual form to serve as the perfect monument.  But I also know that many of the issues I tried to address, regardless of my particular solution or particular form or limitations of my skills are important and must be addressed by whatever is to serve as the memorial place to the events of September 11th, 2003.

I wish I could say and feel  the chosen designs did address all the issues in a satisfactory way because having a great Memorial to this horrible Tragedy is the most important thing, not only for the victims and their families, but for the people who live and work and visit ; for the city; for the nation;  for all the world; for future generations to come.  and, yes for enemies as well.!   Unfortunately, as with apparently so many families of victims and many others I feel they have not!

To be successful it must be more then just a place to mourn, but a place at which we can live now and inspires us to with tomorrows possibilities.

Perhaps it is time to hear from the judges and to see all that they saw in making their decisions

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There are three specific elements that I would change to my design: 

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  • In addition to life size bronze figures of "Victims and Heroes" I would also  have a statue of a Child sitting on the step at the edge of the Tower Footprint Marker with a dog laying with the Child.  This is not only for the children who died in the tragedy and the effort by rescue dogs but is also symbolic of the lost future for many and the lost  innocence of our nation. 
  • The stylized 1/10 Scale "Light Towers" would each be made of four monolithic  slabs as walls rather then as a solid single monolithic form.  The corners would be open space (where the are truncated on the Actual Towers)  to allow visitors to walk into the middle of the open space formed by the four slabs thus putting them at the bottom of a 136 foot tall by 20.8 ft space open to the sky above.. 
  • The flooring of the Tower Footprint Markers would be made of glass to allow views of the Bead rock below.  The areas inside the Pyramids would be open to the Bedrock Below.

 

Submission
The following written words were included as part of my submission and explain and identify the various elements of the design.    

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WORLD TRADE CENTER MEMORIAL DESIGN SUBMISSION: 
Introduction and Descriptive Text of Design and Drawings

WHAT WE DO TODAY DOES MATTER FOR TOMORROW.

REMEMBER - HONOR - RESPECT - RECOGNIZE - REAWAKEN:

We are at once grieved by the fallen and lifted up by the heroic sacrifice and service of many. This proposal is dedicated to their memory, and to the memory of those victims and heroes yet to come in the quest for Justice, the preservation of Freedom; and the search for Tolerance and Understanding among all peoples of this Earth. As the World Trade Center ("WTC") was once the center of the world’s economic life, let this now be the center for a new and greater world of Peace, Justice and Dignity. That, above all else, would be the greatest monument to the sacrifices of September 11th, 2001.

Among the significant elements of the design are the TOWER MARKERS (R1) and MARKER STONES (R2): Four Triangular (Truss) Shaped Monolithic Structures in seamless aluminum finish as per original Towers (or stone if necessary) on stepped up base define Original Footprint of each Tower and the sanctity of the inner area around the Twin Granite Marker Stones that have the names of all Victims inscribed on them . Bottom edges are set inward for appearance of floating above ground. The large "Tunnels"( R1a) passing through these Structures allow physical passage," views and light", contemplation areas and numerous powerful symbolic reminders including "That which has been taken from us yet still the strength and determination to continue on toward the future despite our loss." . Space inside the individual structures meet requirements for Remains of Unidentified Victims, and Private Areas for Families of Victims and additional needs. Semicircular areas provide for more secluded contemplation.

The 1/10th scale stylized Twin Light Towers (R3) provide an essential physical embodiment of the WTC and all that their distinctive physical appearance have come to symbolize of the events. The replication (stylized or literal) of the "Day After" wall (R11) provides a reminder of scale and significance, while the "Victims and Heroes" sculpture (R9) movingly set at one of the "Tunnels" provides the human scale and context of the Day. Victims walking "away" while EMS walk "in" provides poignant image historically authentic representation (6E).

The visual and design inspiration as depicted in the Relief Sculpture Montage (R4) drawn from views of the Towers and events, includes the Tower’s original innovative design derived from a "truss" based inner and outer structure (tubular) which is generally believed to have enabled the Towers to survive as long as they did and contributed to saving many, many thousands of lives. Thus this design is also a monument to the builders and an affirmation to us all that What we do today does matter for tomorrow, as embodied by the "Earth Sphere" (R12) suspended from the new buildings linking the past to the future, and the significance of this event on the entire world and the world yet to be.


"The World Trade Center is a living symbol of man's dedication to world peace ... beyond the compelling need to make this a monument to world peace, the World Trade Center should, because of its importance, become a representation of man's belief in humanity, his need for individual dignity, his beliefs in the cooperation of men, and through cooperation, his ability to find greatness." — Minoru Yamasaki (Designer of the WTC. Spoken following its completion.)


Consistent with evolving requirements and lack of cost parameters, this submission in its entirety is based on a series of elements that work together both in an overall comprehensive design and as independent memorial elements, any of which are powerful testaments to the Events of September 11, 2001 on their own. Taken together this is more then just individual objects but a place to REMEMBER THE PAST, CHERISH THE PRESENT; HOPE FOR THE FUTURE.


PRINCIPLE DESIGN ELEMENTS: (and their most relevant related Mission Elements)


R1. TOWER MARKERS: Makes visible; sanctifies footprints of original WTC towers: 1M-4M; 2E; 3E; 4E; 5E; 3G; 4G; 6G

R2. TOWER MARKER STONES: Twin slightly slopped inward Gray Granite Monoliths at each footprint. Inscribed names of all victims from all events. 1E; All of the elements above.

R3. LIGHT TOWERS - BEACONS OF LIGHT: 1/10TH Scale stylized replication of Twin Towers; smooth seamless monolithic Aluminum finish matching Original (20.8’x20.8’ x 136’), provides sense of scale and assures light shines on memorial each 9/11; seen above street level. Inner Structure from Original Tower Materials. Skyward Light beacons at top make visible at night. North. Tower (R3-N) American Flag; South Tower radio (R3-S) Antenna beams continuous reportings & EMS transmissions from 9/11. Set on raised area serves as focal-point/ stage for gatherings of all sizes and separates "THE GARDEN" (R10) beyond for more secluded contemplation and gatherings. 1M-4M;; 7G; 6E; 7E 1E; 1G; 3G; 4G; 6G

R4. TIME REMEMBERED: East Wall of West Ramp, Montage of WTC from inception to Tragedy: Bronze, Steel & Aluminum alto-relievo (Relief’s). Images provide visual inspiration (Note passageway - if allowed - through the Ramp to West perimeter Slurry Wall for Secluded areas). 1M-4M; 6E; 2E; 7E; 1G-8G

R5. IN THE LINE OF DUTY: Along North Wall of South Ramp, Bronze Plaques of all who died in line of duty including Pentagon, and service men and woman and others in line of duty in pursuit of Justice for 9/11/01. Include crew & passengers United Flight 93 for their heroism. 1M-4M; 1E; 6E; 2E; 7E; 2G; 4G; 5G; 7G; 8G

R6. LIBERTY WALL: At each level of "Ascent" Levels provides Evolving. 4G; 8G


R7. VISION OF YESTERDAY: Glazing of Windows at North side North Tower One Footprint done in replication of original distinctive Ground level Design of WTC Towers and using material from Trade Centers. 1M-4M; 6E; 7E; 3G; 5G; 6G; 7G

R8. REMEMBRANCE PARK: Raised area for multi-leveled Reflecting pools and water falls between; access to Mural; view points; defines areas for gatherings; 18" height along outer perimeter provides substantial seating; passage to slurry wall. Inspired by original; new development; memorial; and pentagon site angles. 1M-4M; 2E; 7E; 3G; 4G; 7G

R9. VICTIMS AND HEROES SCULPTURE : Bronze life size statues of victims and EMS in various poses of walking away; being helped; walking into and out of "Tunnels". Multiple locations moved, changed, reoriented, removed or added over time as part of evolving nature of memorial. Example of grouping showed at South Side of South Tower Marker "Tunnel". (NOTE: some prominent locations all the time might be too intense for some visitors). 1M-4M;; 1E; 6E; 1G-8G

R10. THE GARDEN and R10A "LETS ROLL" MARKER: United Flight 93 in Shanksville, Penn: Trees from the Forest surrounding the crash site in Shanksville. PA (including secluded sitting area for quite contemplation); Max growing light ; Granite Marker Stones to commemorate their heroism. 1M-4M; 2E; 3E; 6E; 7E; 1G-8G

R11. THE DAY AFTER SCULPTURE: Full scale replication, made from original remains of portion of wall that were still standing after Disaster. Casts shadows of open frame work during day, and special lighting at night ; can be seen above street level. 1M-4M; 2E; 6E; 7E; 1G-8G

R12. THE EARTH: Stylized Globe suspended over the Twin Light Towers by cables strung from surrounding buildings of Libeskind "circular" design marks memorial site. Global impact of events; joins with New Development to form total monument to Sacred Commemoration of 9/11/01. Symbol of Hope for the future in the aftermath of these events, and we are, after all a small planet: "Spaceship Earth" ( R. Buckminster Fuller). 1M-4M; 5E; 1G; 3G; 5G; 6G; 7G;

R13. PENTAGON FOUNTAIN: and R13A KOENIG SCULPTURE: Acknowledges attack on Pentagon and surviving element of attack on WTC. Kugelkaryatide", by Fritz Koenig Fritz Koenig's steel-and-bronze sculpture that once stood in the fountain of the trade center plaza now set in a Pentagon shaped fountain. 1M-4M; 2E; 6E; 7E; 3G; 4G; 5G; 6G; 7G

R14. THE LAST STEEL. Last Steel column removed from site in marking end of "clean-up". Dedicated workers who worked in aftermath of disaster & scale of event; Glass case in 6.5 to 1 proportions of WTC Towers.. 1M-4M; 2E; 6E; 7E; 1G-8G

R15. HIJACKER’S MARKER: Stone set in farthest SW corner of site: "May all that you believed holy and sacred find mercy on your soul for the innocent lives you have taken". It is as much a part of those tragic events as a hope for a world in which such events will never happen again. To do otherwise would leave a part of the tragedy left unsaid. 1M-4M; 6E

R16. FEBRUARY 1993: Elyn Zimmerman designed fountain-sculpture to the 1993 bombing, at same location: Red, black and white granite; set over exact location of bomb blast as per original (to be determined). Rebuilt. 1M-4M; 6E

R17. THE ASCENT: Enter site down Open double back stairway also provide access to two different deck levels. Steps match WTC original; Stairs and Deck Levels Provide Changing View Points and Ramps between Deck Levels provide Handicap and alternate access to Ground Zero. Symbolism of Proximity R11 going up and down stairs; Area beneath provides public facilities and storage. 6E; 6G
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Original submission to 
World Trade Center  Memorial Site competition.

 

Tower Footprint Marker

 

Marker Stones at Center of  Tower Markers


 

My design concept for the rebuilding of the World Trade Center Site.  It was prepared and submitted  on September 11, 2002, prior to the commencement of the design competition for the rebuilding of the site

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Comparison of Rattner Design for WTC Site submitted to Silverstein and PANYNJ submitted  on September 11, 2002, to Libeskind design submitted 02/15/03 and to Childs/Libeskind Design on December 20, 2003. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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The Following summarizes the guidelines of the Memorial Design Competition.  A full description can be found at 

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http://www.wtcsitememorial.org/pdf/LMDC_Guidelines_english.pdf

MISSION STATEMENT

1M. Remember and honor the thousands of innocent men, women, and children murdered by terrorists in the horrific attacks of February 26, 1993 and September 11, 2001..
2M. Respect this place made sacred through tragic loss.
3M. Recognize the endurance of those who survived, the courage of those who risked their lives to save others, and the compassion of all who supported us in our darkest hours.
4M. May the lives remembered, the deeds recognized, and the spirit reawakened be eternal beacons, which reaffirm respect for life, strengthen our resolve to preserve freedom, and inspire an end to hatred, ignorance and intolerance.


KEY TO PROGRAM ELEMENTS:

1E. Recognize each individual who was a victim of attacks.
2E. Areas for quite visitation and contemplation.
3E. Areas for families and loves ones of victims.
4E. Accessible final resting place for unidentified remains.
5E. Make visible footprints original WTC towers.
6E. Convey historic authenticity.
7E. Allowances for public ceremonies and celebrations.

GUIDING PRINCIPLES

1G. Magnitude of personal and physical loss.
2G. Acknowledge all who aided in rescue, recovery healing
3G. Respect and enhance sacred quality.
4G. Encourage reflection and contemplation
5G. Evoke historical significance; and worldwide impact
6G. Create original, powerful symbolism.
7G. Inspire and engage to learn more
8G. Evolve.


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World Trade Center  Memorial Competition

 

 

 

 

 

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TOWER FOOT PRINT MARKER - PLAN VIEW: RAISED AREA OVER THE FOOTPRINT OF
ORIGINAL TOWERS WITH MARKER STONES AT THE CENTER (SIZE IS 208' X 208')  

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COMPETITION SUBMISSION BOARD (ACTUAL SIZE IS 30"x40")

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MARKER STONES AT CENTER OF TOWER FOOTPRINT MARKERS - ELEVATION

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LIFE SIZE SCULPTURE OF VICTIMS LEAVING AND EMERGENCY PERSONNEL GOING IN

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DESIGN CONCEPT  FOR REDEVELOPMENT OF WORLD TRADE SITE: INITIAL CONCEPT CREATED AUGUST 2002

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DESIGN CONCEPT FOR OFFICE TOWER AT WORLD TRADE CENTER SITE

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EARTH GLOBE SUSPENDED OVER "LIGHT TOWERS" BY CABLES FROM SURROUNDING BUILDINGS 

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World Trade Center  Memorial Competition

 

 

Comparison of Rattner Design for WTC Site submitted to Silverstein and PANYNJ  on September 11, 2002, to Libeskind design submitted 02/15/03 and to Childs/Libeskind Design presented on December 20, 2003 (Note: Rattner design superimposed on Childs/Libeskind presentation for comparison purposed only).

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